The Forestpine Slasher (2005)

[ResidentEvil131]

This film of mine, will be shot in 2005 (after HC 3) this movie I'll also love to make!!!

The Forestpine Slasher
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October 30, 1977 Ed was born a evil killer, and is obsessed with the carnage in his street of Forestpine, going into houses at night, killing everyone in them, later becoming the legendary killer, The Forestpine Slasher. Later, October 29, 1997, Hillary(Rial) and her five teen friends(Reilly, Borsch, Fries, O'Brian, Wahlgren, Sekiguchi) deside to move into Ed's house for a few months. Soon, Ed begins to spead the blood and screams into his house, killing the teens one by one. Then they catch Ed, decapitate him, and threw his head and his body in the woods, thinking they were rid of him... Ed's evil spirit arises, but can't get out of the woods, his little pergitory, but he soon finds doorways to get back to Forestpine, now Ed is a walking spirit, with the power to kill again! As a ghost, victims can only see Ed through mirror, which makes it funner for Ed! Ed finds out that if he can kill everyone on Forestine, he can regenerate into human again and continue his blood spread! Now Hillary must find a way to stop Ed, or everyone is dead!

go here for more info and pics: http://groups.msn.com/ForestpineSlasher/thefilm.msnw
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Cast
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Ed - Toby Johansen (Me!)
Hilary - Monica Rial (if she agrees)
Don - ---
Mindy - Georgette Reilly (if she agrees)
Josh - Johnny Yong Bosch (if he agrees)
Amy - Zoe Fries (if she agrees)
Mark - Liam Christopher O'Brien (if he agrees)
Krissy - Kari Wahlgren (if she agrees)
Betty - Jennifer Sekiguchi (if she agrees)
Mom - Juliet Cesario (if she agrees)
Son - ---
9-year-old Ed - Jace Johansen (My lil bro)
Ed's Dad - --- (Robert Englund, rumored, if movie is done with 48.F.P.)
Ed's Mom - Petrea Burchard (if she agrees)
Cops - ---
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Street Relitives - Michelle Ruff (if she agrees)
Colleen Clinkenbeard (if she agrees)
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(All are anime voice actors)
(Blank ones coming soon)
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this is whats on the script so far, hope you all like it...





















The Forestpine Slasher

Screenplay by. Toby Johansen




































Scene 1

INT. FORESTPINE / NIGHT

The street of Forestine is very very scarefully quiet, Mom comes out of her house and walks down her driveway and picks up the newspaper, the newspaper is titled “The Forestpine Slasher slashes again!”, Mom walks back into her house.

INT. MOM’S HOUSE / NIGHT

Mom sits down on her chair, puts the paper down, and tries to relax. Mom sits back on her chair, and listins for any noise outside the house. Mom is so terrified, she is shivering. A hand grabs her from behind, and Mom has a scare of a jolt when she gets the grab. But she looks over to see Son, looking up at her with his eyes darkened and is pale, like a ghost. Mom then hugs around Son.

MOM

Oh my baby...

SON

Mommy I had a bad dream...

MOM

Oh baby...come on...

Mom takes Son to his room and tucks him in the bed and kisses his forehead.

MOM

Okay, baby, I need you to go sleep for Mommy...

Mom then sees Son alittle sad in the face.

SON

Mommy, will they ever catch the bad man?...

Mom suddenly gets frightened.

MOM

Oh Sweetheart, lets not talk about the bad man, ofcourse they’ll catch him...

SON

Mommy?

MOM

Yes?

SON

Will you tell me the story of Ed Rellik?

MOM

Oh Honey, you know that story gives you nightmares...

SON

Pleeeeease! I’ll go straght to sleep, Mommy!
Mom swallows.

MOM

...Alright...

Mom tells the story of Ed Rellik, The Forestpine Slasher.
It all began on October 29, 1970, young Ed Rellik was born, but owned to terrible parents...

INT. FLASHBACKS / ED’S HOUSE / EVENING

...when Ed was 6-years-old, he was born into the world of hatred, mugshot, and terror, his parents were drug addicts, which made them very terrible people, everyday when Ed would return home from school, his parents would beat him, beat him, beat him, beat him, beating him up good, as they think it’s a game...

ED’S MOM

DAMN IT EDWARD! WHY MUST YOU DISSAPOINT US?!! YOU MAGET SACK OF ****!

ED’S DAD

YOUR IN OUR WAY, ED, SO YOU MUST GET OUT OF THE WAY!

Ed’s Mom and Ed’s Dad are beating up poor 9-year-old Ed, kicking at him, slapping, punching, spitting at him, screaming at his face as 9-year-old Ed just layed there and watch, feeling the terror within him growing. Coughing up blood.

...but school is even worse for Edward, the children thought he was a freak, a creep, a boy that was bought from hell, as they all take him out back of the school, and torture him, almost ripping at his chest...

INT. FLASHBACKS / ED’S SCHOOL / AFTERNOON

The student boys look at 9-year-old Ed wierdly, they gather around him and take him out back of the school and begin to beat him up too, hitting his face with chains, kicking his legs and his stomach. 9-year-old Ed is moaning.

SON: ...Did Ed have a girlfriend, Mommy?...

...no girlfriend, they all thought he was a rat, that could walk, and so they never care about him...

9-year-old Ed is walking down the hallway, a few School Girls walk by, Ed waves at them.

9-YEAR-OLD ED

Hello Girls.

The School Girls turn their faces away from 9-year-old Ed. 9-year-old Ed just walks along, alone the hallways.

INT. FLASHBACKS / FORESTPINE / NIGHT

...Ed was just getting used to the evil surrounding him, until...one night, October 29, 1979, at the Rellik House, 9-year-old Edward was just playing in his room, trying not to think of the terror that surrounds him, Ed’s Mother left the house, abandoning him, leaving him for dead for his father...

INT. FLASHBACKS / ED’S HOUSE / NIGHT

Ed’s Mom is just walking around.

ED’S MOM

Ed really dissapoints us Dad...

ED’s DAD

Yes...He’s a real *******...little ****...


ED’S MOM

Do what you need to do, he must be punished...perminatly! I’m getting the **** outta here, I need a real man!

ED’S DAD

Fine, leave you whorey *****!

Ed’s Mom leaves the house. Ed’s Dad gets up and goes into 9-year-old Ed’s room, 9-year-old Ed looks back, very afraid, Ed’s Dad grabs him and slaps him around, his legs twitching. 9-year-old Ed looks around, and picks up a screwdriver and jabs it into Ed’s Dad’s hand. Ed’s Dad screams in pain, as 9-year-old Ed runs out of the room and hides. Ed’s Dad pulls the screwdriver out of his hand, it’s bleeding hard, as he walks slowly toward the kitchen.

ED’S DAD

Oh, Edward...come out, come out! Daddy’s got a surprize for ya!

Suddnely 9-year-old Ed comes out of know where, and gets onto his father’s back, stabbing him with his kitchen knife. Stabbing, stabbing, stabbing, stabbing. Ed’s Dad falls to the floor, 9-year-old Ed keeps stabbing him, Ed’s Dad’s hands twitching with each stab, until they stopped, Ed’s Dad is dead.

...but that was until Ed got to him first...

9-year-old Ed stands up, with his knife, with and evil smile and giggles.

SON: ...What happens then Mommy?...

INT. FORESTPINE / NIGHT

...then the police, believe things around the Rellik house were pretty suspitious, so they go to investigate, but Ed got them too, soon after, on the night of October 30, 1979, Ed threw their bodies off the road, and into the creek, where they’ll never be found, beyond the smell of death and flesh...

The dead bodies are decomposed, and are disgusting looking.

...Ed then became so obsessed with killing, the color of the victims blood, the way they look when they’re dead, who knows, Ed goes door to door each night, to seek more victims, for the love of his killing, bloodfest, murder spree...

INT. PRESENT / MOM’S HOUSE / NIGHT

MOM

And that’s the story of Edward Rellik...

Son is hiding under the covers.

MOM

Oh poor baby, did I scare you?

SON

No, it’s just cold, Mommy

MOM

Oh, oh well, goodnight, baby...

Mom kisses Son goodnight.

Mom is in her bedroom, reading a novel, she then frustartedly shuts the book and lies down on her bed, she lies on her pillow softly.

MOM

Did I tell him too much?...

Mom falls asleep. Suddenly, Mom hears a loud scream of bloody murder. Mom quickly gets out of her bed and runs to Son’s door.

MOM

Baby?! BABY?!! WHAT’S WRONG?! BABY!!

Mom opens Son’s door and runs into the room, Mom sees Son stabbed to death, blood alover him and his bed.
Mom screams. Mom then hears something behind her, she yurns around, and sees Ed, Ed then strikes Mom with his knife. STAB!

OPENING / CREDITS

BRAIN DAMAGE FILMS PRESENTS

TOBY JOHANSEN

MONICA RIAL

THE FORESTPINE SLASHER

JULIET CESARIO

(UNKNOWN ACTOR FOR: SON)

PETREA BURCHARD

(UNKNOWN ACTOR FOR: ED’S DAD)

JACE JOHANSEN

JORDAN RENALDS

EMILY ARMSTRONG

COLLEEN CLINKENBEARD

KARI WAHLGREN

JENNIFER SEKIGUCHI

GEORGETTE REILLY

ZOE FRIES

JOHN YONG BOSCH

LIAM CHRISTOPHER O’BRIEN

MICHELLE RUFF

Camera Supervistor
JORDAN RENALDS
TOBY JOHANSEN

Casting by.
TOBY JOHANSEN
Edited by.
(UNKNOWN)

Special Effects by.
JORDAN RENALDS
and
TOBY JOHANSEN

Director of Photography
TOBY JOHANSEN

Music by.
TOBY JOHANSEN
and MIDNIGHT SYNDICATE

Written by.
TOBY JOHANSEN

Created and Directed by.
TOBY JOHANSEN


Scene 2


INT. HILLSIDE / NEARLY DUSK

Hilary, Mark, Josh, Krissy, Betty, Amy, Don, and Mindy are walking along the hill, they are all tired, and drowzy.
They all look around.
Don laughes.

DON

Looks like theres no sign of life!

Mindy, Amy, Betty, and Josh start throwing cans at him.

JOSH

Dude, Shut up!

BETTY

Go suck a dick Don!

MINDY

Shut up!

AMY

Yeah!

DON

OW! God! I’m sorry!

JOSH

*******...

AMY

You never shut up Don!
Hilary turns around to stare at them all fight, Mark stares at Hilary, they both smile at eachother.

DON

Well, it’s not my fault that we took a wrong turn at the claytown creek, thanks to Hilary!

MINDY

Shut up!

BETTY

Your the one who got drunk and puked all over Josh, Don!

DON

Ah! Shut up Betty!

HILARY

Knock it off you guys!

MARK

We’re not dumbass cannibles you know!

DON

Well I could be...(stares at Betty)...and you’d be first!

HILARY

Well, it’s not like we’re lost guys, its just...a...

Hilary stops when she and her friends band up together to study the house that’s infront of them. It’s Ed’s house.

DON

...civilization!

Don starts to run toward the house, as Betty, Amy, Mindy, and Josh start to run after him.

JOSH

If there’s a can of beer in there, I get first dibs!

Then Hilary and Mark start to run after them.

MARK

Guys come back!

HILARY

Yeah! We don’t even know who lives here!

MARK

(sigh)...Ah well, at least it will have a phone so we can report about our car accident and we’ll be home free!

HILARY

Hmm That too!
BOTH

HEY GUYS WAIT UP!

Don and Josh enter the house.

DON

(sniffs)...home sweet home

JOSH

Where the hell is the beer?

Soon everyone is in the house, and when they step into the kitchen, a foul rotten fleshy stentch stinks up the place.

BETTY

Jesus H Crist! What the hell is that smell?!

MINDY

I CAN’T BREATH!

Mark runs to the kitchen sink and takes out a spray, and sprays it all over the place, giving everything a good fresh sent.

HILARY

Thanks, Mark!

AMY

Wayta go Mark!

MARK

Geez, what was that smell?

Everybody just drops all their things onto the floor and spreads out everywhere. Josh opens the fridge and finds two cases of beer, undrunk.

JOSH

Happy Birthday Josh!

Josh takes the beer, and sits in the family room with Amy on the couch. Don looks through the cabnets, and finds cereal and takes it out, puts some in a bowl, puts in some fresh milk, and takes a spoon, and eats up.

DON

MMMM! Captain Cruch, you so kick ass!

BETTY

Hey, Four-eyes, how about giving me some of that surgary sweetness?

Don hogs up his cereal.

DON

Get your own damn cereal, women! this one is all mine!


Mark and Hilary just look at eachother and laugh.

(To be continued...)
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this may be alot of sequils and alot of work ahead, but it will be awsome!

The Forestpine Slasher 2
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A few hitch hickers, Dayna (Jenna Haze), Mary(Holly Hollywood), and John, walk up the road to Forestpine, hungry and dying, there they realize all the houses are locked, due to Ed's slashing about, the only house they found opened, was Ed's house, Ed then starts to go in after them, "playing" with them, it's up to Dayna, Mary, Trish, Patty, Babs, and John to stop Ed and end the carnage, or Ed will have one hell of a time!

The Forestpine Slasher 3
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Hilary has come back to Forestpine, as a detective, she wants to end Ed's killings once and for all, until she meets a group of bandets that escaped from jail, Bones Girl, Thrashly, and Ripdicker, who also walk into Ed's world, Ed is having fun, until he crosses them, knowing they are bad ass characters that kick ass, and has a go on them, but Ed soon finds out Hilary is around and is ready to finish what he started from her!

The Forestpine Slasher 4: Devil's Night
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It's October 30, and all the freaks are celebrating a "burning down" routien, Devil's Night, which is also the night Ed's Mom comes back from the asylum, after being cured of her drug addictness, she goes back to Forestpine to find Ed, Ed is having alot of fun just burning people to death, burn, burn, burn! while Ed is having his fun, his Mom is wondering who is doing all the killings in Forestpine, and soon finds out when Ed catches her, giving her a mother's day gift of all!

The Forestpine Slasher 5: Dark Resurrection
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Ed is back! he's finally came from the mirror containing him for 10 years, and is back to being the killer among killers! Hilary's widowed husband, Jacob, is having a very hard time in the police station missing Hilary very much after her death, but when the case file of "Ed Rellik" comes on his desk, he sets out the swat onto Forestpine to search and destroy Ed, but Ed is becoming much more smarter and killing more, having the best carnage fun!

The Forestpine Slasher 6: Lurking Fear
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Two small town girls, Jesse and Berry, buy a house in Forestpine, the house is right next to Ed's, and Ed is having his terms with the relitives of Forestpine, as Jesse and Berry start to expearence the terror among Forestpine, they both grab any weapon they can and are bent on stopping Ed and his blood spree!

The Forestpine Slasher: Ed Rellik (Prequil)
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October 29,1974, the night he was born...
October 30,1979, the night he killed...
October 29,1985, the night he gets his revenge on the children at his school...
Ed Rellik tells his story of when he grows up to be the lendary killer, The Forestpine Slasher, and find out there is more than just a few people he killed over his bloody years!

hehe.

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So, do you like it so far?

BLOOD! BLOOD! BLOOD!
:angry: :angry: :angry:

[Cheetara101]

Sounds stupid. Sounds typical.

[ResidentEvil131]

oh shut up, u havent even seen it yet!

[Cheetara101]

oh shut up, u havent even seen it yet!

Uh.... make me. :D

[EvilSam]

Another teen horror flick......stupid.

[Aztec]

oh shut up, u havent even seen it yet!

Hey, don't post stuff up to be evaluated if you can't take the criticism. Especially, if you're gonna post up a very generic script.

[Angelixx]

tips:

-dont use a knife....be creative.......michael myrers owns the kitchen knife.....use something that people might not usually associate with a weapon and use it to scare the crap outta them.......somethign like a a 90º angeled surface like a table edge.....slowly break the spine of the victim....sounds and all........that would be creepy


-dont use just teens........everyone knows that the slut is gonnna die first and the most virginous will survive.....so predictable.......throw in some adults....and to really traumatize people....slash a child (not that i like that idea but hey it would disturb me).......better yet.....kill off EVERYONE.....i never like having a lead character survive......everyone must DIE!!!

- i think in there somewhere it shows a flash back of ed like having girls turn away from him and him basically being rejected........giving sympathy to the murderer........IMO this is always a big no-no.....i was always given a little bit of chills by michael myers and Jason Voorhes simply because they just seemed evil to the core.....however after really finding out about Jason Voorhees....he has a weakness with the whole water element of the story......specailly played up in Freddy vs. Jason.......kinda made him less scary.......the scariest things are the things which cant be destroyed.......its scary to believe your gonna die and nothing can stop it

those are just a few things that i feel IMO would make ya a damn good horror flick

[SnoBorderZero]

AHHHH! This forum has been infested by n00bs!!

[ResidentEvil131]

tips:

-dont use a knife....be creative.......michael myrers owns the kitchen knife.....use something that people might not usually associate with a weapon and use it to scare the crap outta them.......somethign like a a 90º angeled surface like a table edge.....slowly break the spine of the victim....sounds and all........that would be creepy


-dont use just teens........everyone knows that the slut is gonnna die first and the most virginous will survive.....so predictable.......throw in some adults....and to really traumatize people....slash a child (not that i like that idea but hey it would disturb me).......better yet.....kill off EVERYONE.....i never like having a lead character survive......everyone must DIE!!!

- i think in there somewhere it shows a flash back of ed like having girls turn away from him and him basically being rejected........giving sympathy to the murderer........IMO this is always a big no-no.....i was always given a little bit of chills by michael myers and Jason Voorhes simply because they just seemed evil to the core.....however after really finding out about Jason Voorhees....he has a weakness with the whole water element of the story......specailly played up in Freddy vs. Jason.......kinda made him less scary.......the scariest things are the things which cant be destroyed.......its scary to believe your gonna die and nothing can stop it

those are just a few things that i feel IMO would make ya a damn good horror flick

Dear Lord O_O

I love Ed with a kitchen knife, it's more better and much for his character, the actors are not really teens, theyre adults, and about Ed's flashbacks, those tell his story, hes more of a child's fairy tale that all the parents of Forestpine put together to maybe scare or warn the children because the tale is true, eventhough they know Ed is lurking outside of their houses, the girls in the hallway dont like Ed because they all think he's a freak, why do you call that a big no no?

...a table edge...please!

And Ed, I think, is much more better in living than those movie monsters.
this is a b-horror flick, and u need to check out BDF more often, not all the b-films are "perfect"

[ResidentEvil131]

Hey, don't post stuff up to be evaluated if you can't take the criticism. Especially, if you're gonna post up a very generic script.

I was just goofing off, i wasnt really telling him/her to shut up :meanie:

[Angelixx]

Dear Lord O_O


...a table edge...please! "




hey its creative....let's see you think up something like that lol

[ResidentEvil131]

ok

[Angelixx]

ok


well i just got served ;)

[cg124]

I thought your ideas were great angelixx!

[Angelixx]

I thought your ideas were great angelixx!



well thanx very much cg......at least some one appreciates my artistic brutality

[cg124]

well thanx very much cg......at least some one appreciates my artistic brutality


At least you were trying to be creative and not follow the typical slasher movie

[Tenafly Viper]

I think you have a wonderful future in "Direct to Video". A bit generic but generic seems to work now a days, good luck with that.

[ResidentEvil131]

if u all want to know about the entire cast? type their names on ur search box, ull be surprised on what they do also! ^_^

[ResidentEvil131]

Don was eating like crazy. Amy was just searching around. Mark's eye caught the phone, and went for it.

MARK

Finally a phone!

Mark takes the phone and listens for a dial tone. The phone is dead. Mark tries to dial up again, still nothing. Mark then turns to the gang.

MARK

Phone's dead.

Hilary looks scared.

HILARY

What?

DON

What the hell dude? Stop kidding around!

AMY

What?

MARK

I don't hear anything.

Hilary walks to the phone.

HILARY

That's impossible.

Hilary grabs the phone and listens. There's no sound.

HILARY

Damn! Damn! Damn!

Mark holds Hilary's shoulder. Hilary looks back at him.

MARK

Don't get your nickers in a twist, we'll go ask the neihbors if we can borrow their phone.

HILARY

Yeah right. As if you seen my nickers, perv.

JOSH

You guys go on, I'll stay here with my wedding peach.

AMY

You Hunk!

Amy hugs Josh. Don gets up from his chair.

DON

I'm goin' I'm not gonna sit here and watch Beerboy and his bondage girl loose their virginaties!

BETTY

I'm goin' too, I really hate to say this, but I'm with Don at this point.

DON

*****.

HILARY

Alright we're gone.

MARK

Yeah, have fun you too, and if the owner comes back, tell him we needed to use his house!

Hilary, Mark, and Betty leave. Don just stays in the room with Josh and Amy.

JOSH

Orgy!!

DON

Ahh!

Don runs out of the room and out the door.

DON

Sickening ****!

Josh stares over at Mindy who is lying on the couch.

JOSH

Well, what about you Mindy?

MINDY

I'm resting here.

JOSH

Okay.

Josh and Amy look at eachother feistily.

AMY

Let's go boy boy!

BOTH

AHhahahahahahe!

Josh carries Amy out of the room and up stairs. While Mindy is asleep.

INT. FORESTPINE / NEARLY DUSK

Hilary, Mark, Betty, and Don were walking around the street. Going house to house, asking to come in and use a phone. Hilary knocks on the door.

STREET RELETIVE #3

GO AWAY!

Hilary and her friends get startled.

HILARY

Can we come in please?

STREET RELETIVE #3

GET THE HELL AWAY FROM ME!!

Hilary and her friends backed away, as the Street Reletive #3 pressed her face at the window. Hilary gets freaked out.

STREET RELETIVE #3

Get the hell away from here! You'll bring death to my territory!

HILARY

We just need to use a phone!

STREET RELETIVE #3

My phone is dead! NOW GET YOUR ASSES OUTTA HERE!

Hilary, Mark, Don, and Betty run from the house. Don turns around and flips her off as she pulled back from the window. Betty was complaining.

DON

Yeah whatever Grammy! AND THAT'S NOT VERY LADY LIKE!

BETTY

*****!

HILARY

Guys shut up! She'll call the cops!

MARK

Oh yeah, she'll call the cops with a dead phone?

HILARY

Well, what if she has a cell phone?

BETTY

That old hag?

DON

What a bag bitting *****!

HILARY

Let's try another house.

MARK

Yeah.

Soon Hilary and her friends are in the next house, they see Street Reletive #4 checking mail.

HILARY

Hey!

Street Reletive #4 looks up at Hilary and drops the mail and runs back to the house. Mark and Don chase after her, Hilary and Betty right behind her. Street Reletive #4 gets inside her house and locks the door. Mark hits the door with rage.

MARK

Damn it! What the **** is going on here?!

DON

This is the same affair we had with the other woman down the street!

BETTY

Miss?

HILARY

Excuse me, we need to use your phone!

Soon Street Reletive #2 opens the door, aiming a gun at Hilary and her friends, Street Reletive #4 right behind her, as Street Reletive #4 cocked her gun.

STREET RELETIVE #2

I think it's time for all of you to leave now.

BETTY

We just need to borrow a ****in' phone!

STREET RELETIVE #2

Our phone line isn't working! Someone cut the cord!

STREET RELETIVE #4

Why can't they just leave us alone?

HILARY

Do you have a cellphone?

STREET RELETIVE #4

No. Stolen.

DON

What the?!

MARK

That's so nuts!

BETTY

Huh?!

STREET RELETIVE #2

Now I suggest you get your lily white asses out of our sight before I have all your balls turned into cuacamoli!

Don and Mark started to back away. Hilary and Betty then gave Street Reletive #4 and Street Reletive #2 a mean look and started to walk away with Mark and Don. Soon, the streets of Forestpine were darkening. Hilary, Betty, Mark and Don were running out of houses to check a phone for, and so they have one more house.

HILARY

Well this house is our last stand!

BETTY

This sucks!

MARK

Oh thank god! My legs are feeling like ****!

DON

I hear you man!

HILARY

Let's go

Hilary and her friends get to the next house.

INT. ED'S HOUSE / DARK

After Amy and Josh had their little "fun", they're just watching T.V., drinking. Amy then turns to Josh, in a drouzy situation.

AMY

Oh, Baby, what a ride

JOSH

Oh yeah

AMY

But you know, this is really strange

JOSH

What?

AMY

Well, this house

JOSH

What about it?

AMY

If this place is so desserted, why is all the owner's stuff still here? And the owner would have came back by now

JOSH

Wierd

AMY

Yeah

Miny is still just sleeping down stairs.

INT. ED'S BACKYARD / NIGHT

It's dark outside, Ed is standing in the backyard, staring up at the window where Amy and Josh lie, Ed tipped his knife, making a shreeshy sound. Ed then made a twisted smile.

ED

Newbies! This is gonna be fun!

Ed then walks toward the basement door, lurking into his house.

INT. STREET RELETIVE #1'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Hilary, Mark, Betty and Don enter the house of Street Reletive #1. Hilary looks around the house wondering if anyone was home. Mark and Don were in the kitchen. Betty was checking out the sofa.

BETTY

Hey Don, while your in there, get me a can will yeah?

DON

Sure thing!

HILARY

BETTY!

BETTY

What?

HILARY

This is somebody's house!

BETTY

So? This place is probrably as desserted as the the other house where Josh and Amy are

DON

There's no beer Betty-wetty!

Hilary chuckles at Don's joke.

BETTY

*******

MARK

Hil, do you see anything?

Hilary keeps looking around.

HILARY

No.

Suddenly, Street Reletive #1 jumps out at Hilary, and she and Betty scream.

INT. ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Amy gets up from the bed.

JOSH

Where you goin' baby?

AMY

Just into the bathroom, be back in a jiff!

Amy walks into the bathroom. Josh just sits there watching T.V. Amy puts some make up on. Ed is in the darkness in the other room as he stares at Amy, raising his knife. Amy still eager on putting her make up on. Ed shuts off the lights. The bathroom is pitch black.

AMY

Ah! ****! Stop with the scares Josh!

Amy turns on the lights, and goes back to the mirror, and she sees Ed right behind her, Ed covers Amy's mouth, before she could scream, and slits her throat as blood spews all over the bathroom. Ed then begins stabbing Amy a few times. Amy splirts blood in Ed's face as he kills her. Then Amy falls into the bathtub dead. Ed then takes his knife and licks the blade sickly, licking up Amy's blood.

ED

Mmm Tastey! Now for the inbread loser!

Ed walks out of the bathroom. Josh sits up listening.

JOSH

Amy? You okay? Amy?!

Josh stands up and looks into the bathroom, the lights are off so he turns them back on, revealing a terrorizing horror to him as he stared at Amy's dead body in a pool of blood in the tub.

JOSH

Ah! Holy ****!! Amy! Oh my Jesus God! AMY!!!

Ed comes from behind Josh and stabs through his chest, Josh vomits up blood, as he turns around to see Ed, and falls back, then Ed raises his knife and chops off Josh's head, blood shooting out all over. Ed gives out his evil laughter.

ED

Other heads will roll, and some won't! Now, what to do with the happy cupple?

Ed thinks to himself, then looks in a corner, and has an idea. Ed then grabs Amy and Josh's bodies.

MINDY

Nightmare land...zzz...

INT. STREET RELETIVE #1'S HOUSE / NIGHT

After getting the **** scared out of them, Hilary, Mark, Don and Betty sit down to listen to Street Reletive #1 lay down all the answers, why the reletives of Forestpine keep their windows and doors locked, and never lets anyone in is because of the Forestpine Slasher.

STREET RELETIVE #1

...He then killed his father, and then killed two police officers, and got rid of the bodies by throwing them off the edge of the road, then he came back to Forestpine to seek more victims in his twisted mind to kill and kill and kill, never stopping, and he is still here! In Forestpine, lurking outside the houses, ready to kill...

HILARY

What?

MARK

****!

DON

What the hell?

BETTY

Hell, I don't believe in this ****

MARK

Boy, it was no wonder why those people wouldn't let us in to talk on a phone

HILARY

But what about the phone lines? We need to call the police!

STREET RELETIVE #1

He cut the phone line, the cords, the plugs, everything!

MARK

Woe

Betty then walked to the front door, then looks back at Don.

BETTY

Don!

Don looks back at Betty.

DON

What?

BETTY

Come on!

DON

What the hell, this woman is too freakin weird for me!

Don gets up and walks to Betty.

MARK

Where you too going?

BETTY

Just to go check on Amy and Josh and Mindy

HILARY

Tell them to get ready, cause we're leaving!

STREET RELETIVE #1

You won't leave Forestpine alive

Then Hilary and Mark get very scared, as Betty and Don leave outside.

HILARY

What did you say?

STREET RELETIVE #1

We've seen him do his bloody work, no one has ever left Forestpine alive, ever!

MARK

Why the hell do you all live like this? Why didn't you plan to flee?!

STREET RELETIVE #1

Because he plans ahead.

INT. OUTSIDE / DARK

Betty and Don are just having their "play" time.

DON

What's all this about?

BETTY

What do you think?

DON

Death? Sex?

BETTY

(Chuckles) Your funny Don

Betty and Don kiss.

Ed is in a distance, staring straght at them.

ED

Batch number two!

Ed starts to walk toward them. Betty hears a twig break, and stares. Nothing is lurking about, Ed's not in his space anymore. Then Betty goes back to kissing Don. Ed is behind the scary dark tree behind them. Ed raises his knife.
A girl, Krissy, pounces onto Betty and Don playfully. Ed then puts down his knife.

DON

Holy ****in' ****!

BETTY

What the hell?!

KRISSY

Got ya!!

DON

Who the **** are you?

KRISSY

Krissy.

BETTY

You freak!

DON

Krissy, you trying to give me a ****in' heart attack?!

Krissy laughs.

BETTY

Damn it! I think I just wet myself!

Don laughs with Krissy, then Betty joins in.

BETTY

You *******s!

KRISSY

Hehe Yeah! So who are you guys?

DON

I'm Don

BETTY

I'm your mom whose gonna kill you for scaring us! Don't you know this **** face killer is lurking around the streets of Forestpine?! And my name is Betty!

Krissy suddenly freezes.

KRISSY

He's-He's back?

DON

Yeah, this freakish old lady told us

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KRISSY

You sure she wasn't kidding around?

BETTY

I thought she was

DON

She seemed kinda serious

KRISSY

Oh no!

DON

Yeah.

BETTY

Let's just get into the house, Amy and Josh must be sleeping by then, and maybe Mindy

Don, Betty and Krissy start to walk to Ed's house. Ed gets real angry when they pass by.

ED

*****!

Ed then heads off into the darkness.

INT. ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Betty, Don and Krissy enter the house. Mindy then awakes.

DON

Mindy, did you see what was going on?

MINDY

No. I was asleep all through.

DON

Damn.

MINDY

Why? What did I miss?

Krissy steps into the room and sits on a couch.

MINDY

Whose this?

BETTY

Krissy. The idiot who scared the **** out of us on the way over here!

Krissy chuckles.

BETTY

Oh shut up!

MINDY

So where is the others?

DON

Well, Hilary and Mark are talking to a lady next to the house, we don't know where Josh and Amy had gone, but we have to go

MINDY

Go? Why?

DON

Theres a killer in the streets, here.

Mindy's eyes widen.

MINDY

Are you serious?

DON

The lady sure as hell sounded like it

MINDY

Well, then let's go find Josh and Amy, and get Hilary and Mark and get out of here!

Don and Krissy spread out in the house. Betty sits with Mindy.

INT. STREET RELETIVE #3'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Street Reletive #3 is getting ready for bed, holding a crusafix in her hand. Street Reletive #3 starts to pray, when she hears something coming from downstairs.

STREET RELETIVE #3

Whose there?!

Street Reletive #3 walks to the basement door, she looks down in the stairs, nothing. Ed is in the corner, he slips up and evil grin, he raised up his knife. As Street Reletive #3 left the doorway, Ed licks his lips, dastardly.

ED

Dinner time!

Ed walks from his corner. Soon Street Reletive #3 is back in her room, she slips into her bed, fast asleep, until her bedroom door slowly creaked open as Ed's shadow fled across the room toward her.

INT. ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

After searching throughout the house for Josh and Amy, Don and Krissy come back to the room.

BETTY

Find anything?

DON

No.

KRISSY

Nothin'.

MINDY

Where could they be?

DON

Well there was only one place we didn't look was the basement, with no lights, but we've got flashlights

Don and Krissy both take out four flashlights. Krissy tosses one to Mindy and Don tosses one to Betty.

BETTY & MINDY

Thanks

KRISSY

Let's go and check the basement

MINDY

Let's do, cause I'm tired as hell

Don, Krissy, Betty and Mindy walk to the basement doorway, they turn on their flashlights and walk down stairs. Krissy closing the door behind them.

INT. STREET RELETIVE'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Street Reletive #3 suddenly wakes up, she looks around. She's alittle relieved to not find and introder in her house, atleast thats what she thinks, until she turns to look at the foot of her bed and screams of bloody murder, Ed is at the end of Street Reletive #3's bed, his knife lifted up. Street Reletive #3 tries to hesitate and get away, but then Ed stabbed one of her knee caps. Street Reletive #3 screams in pain. Ed then moves more toward Street Reletive #3, his knife dripping of blood.

ED

Hehehehe!

Ed then pounces on Street Reletive #3 and rapes her alittle, then stabs her other knee cap, blood splurting on Ed's face and his shirt. Street Reletive #3 twists around, unable to move, Ed takes her up and then raises his knife. From outside of the house, we hear Street Reletive #3 scream and then quickly freezes.

INT. STREET RELETIVE #1'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Hilary and Mark walk out of Street Reletive #1's house, after listening to Street Reletive #1's creepy tales of the slasher's past.

MARK

That was just totally screwed up.

HILARY

I don't blame you, Mark, but I can't help to think that I'm starting to believe it myself.

MARK

Hey! What's that?!

Mark points over to Street Reletive #3's house, Hilary watched, Mark and Hilary saw a dark figure scampering from the side of the house. It was Ed. Mark and Hilary looked at eachother then they ran to Street Reletive #3's house, and went inside.

INT. ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

In the basement. Don, Krissy, Betty and Mindy are searching around the basement for Josh and Amy, the basement smells like dead flesh.

MINDY

Jesus H. Crist! What the hell is that smell?

KRISSY

Good God!

BETTY

Thanks for letting it cut, Don.

DON

Shut up!

Betty then wonders off into the next room. She keeps looking around, until her flashlight stop at the floor staring at a pair of feet. Betty raised up her flashlight, revealing Amy and Josh dead, both tied up with each other on a chair. Betty screams of terror. Don, Mindy and Krissy run into the room.

DON

What is it?!

KRISSY

AHH!

MINDY

AHH!

DON

OH ****!!

They all see Amy and Josh's dead bodies. Then they all freeze when they hear footsteps above them. It's Ed. They think it's Hilary and Mark.

MINDY

MARK!

BETTY

HILARY!

DON

HILARY!

The footsteps stop and then head to the basement door, they hear the basement door creak open.

DON

...Hilary?...

They heard the footsteps coming down the stairs slowly. Then that's wen they relized, it was not Hilary or Mark. The figure came across them, raising his knife. They backed away.

ED

I'm coming to get you all.

Betty raised her flashlight toward the figure's face, and they all see him form his evil grin.

ED

Boo!

Don whispers to them.

DON

...Listen, I'll try to hold him back, you all just go and run ur asses off alright?

BETTY

But Don...

DON

Just go Betty, I've been an ass to you, and I want you girls to live!

KRISSY

No!

Ed starts to take a step toward them. Don ran toward Ed, only to put his arms around Ed's neck, until Ed stabs into him. The girls shreak in terror, but they run like hell.

ED

You? Stop me? Bull ****in' ****!

Ed then stabs Don a few more times, then puts Don to the wall and stabs his back, and then his head. Don falls to the floor dead. Ed then turns to the back door. Mindy, Betty and Krissy are desperately trying to get threw the fence and the yard door, but it was locked up tightly, then they ran to the other side, it was also locked. Betty runs up the porch steps, she tries to open the back door, but it was locked.

BETTY

The door is locked!

KRISSY

Hurry! We got to get the hell out of here!

MINDY

We'll have to climb over the fence!

INT. STREET RELETIVE #3'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Hilary and Mark look among the Street Reletive #3's house.

HILARY

Hello?

MARK

Mame?

They find drops of blood, trailing up the stairs, and right infront of them in the hallway, was the dead body of Street Reletive #3, she has been stabbed in the knee caps and stabbed into the head, blood everywhere. Hilary screams of terror. Mark gets freaked out. Soon after, Mark and Hilary run out of the house, and run toward Ed's house.

INT. ED'S HOUSE / DARK

Hilary and Mark hear yelling in the backyard, and they run back to the fence post, Mindy and Krissy are trying to get over the fence. Hilary and Mark run over to help them.

MINDY

Hilary! Mark! Help us!

KRISSY

Help!

MARK

Hold on!

Mark and Hilary help Krissy get over the fence, then they help Mindy get over the fence.

MINDY

Come on Betty!

HILARY

Betty is in there too?!

KRISSY

Betty! Hurry!

MARK

BETTY!

Betty is scrambling to her feet to get over the fence, when suddenly, Ed comes from behind her, and slits her throat.

HILARY

BETTY! NO!

MINDY

BETTY!

MARK

Betty!!!

KRISSY

Oh no!!!!!

Ed then pulls Betty back with him. Into the back of the house. Betty vomiting blood on Ed's hand. Hilary and Mark pull back Krissy and Mindy. As they runaway to Street Reletive #3's house, closes and locks the door. Hilary, Mark, Mindy and Krissy gasp for breath. Terror in their souls.

HILARY

We're not safe here, or in the street!

KRISSY

I notice!

MARK

So what do we do now?

HILARY

I don't know

MINDY

You don't know?! We're about to be killed by a psychopathic killer who just killed Don, Betty, Josh, and Amy!

MARK

...He got the reletive here too...

Mark points to the body at the top of the stairs. Mindy quickly scoots back to Krissy, who is clinging onto Hilary's arm. Hilary was thinking, thinking of how they can make their escape from Ed's evil hands. She then came up with an idea.

HILARY

I think I have a plan, but it will be a tight one

MARK

Good.

MINDY

For your sake, Hilary, I hope it's a good plan!

KRISSY

Well what are we waiting for? Tell us! The suspence is kil-- ahem I mean, thrilling me!

HILARY

Well...

INT. ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Ed is lurking outside the house, he looks inside the house to see if anymore victims were walking around in his little death trap. Ed then hears something, coming from outside, in the back porch. Ed walks outside the back porch to see what was going on. Krissy was in the ground moaning.

KRISSY

URrrrrrghh.....

ED

Hmmm a new load! Heh

On the porch, Mark was behind Ed, invisibly covered in tarp. Before Ed could reach toward the porch stairs, Mark came from behind and wrapped Ed in the tarp holding him down as Ed tried to scramble to his feet, but couldn't move. Ed tried stabbing his way out of the tarp, but his arms were tied to his chest in the tarp. Mindy runs over and kicks Ed's face. Ed's vision was blury. Hilary walked to one area of the porch and grabbed and axe. Hilary walked toward Ed, raising her axe a inch.

HILARY

You bastard!

ED

Hehe...

HILARY

You killed my friends, and others! Why?!

ED

I love to kill. That's my only life, forever, I love to kill, kill, kill, kill, and kill, watching them scream and twist and thrash around when i ripped them apart, squeeling like little pigs! Even the children sounded like dying ****in' chimpmunks as I tore out their intestins, hehehehe...

After Krissy gets back to the porch, she spits in Ed's face.

KRISSY

You ****in' stupid *******! You killed my parents!

MINDY

You killed so many innocent lives for your loving of killing, your sick...YOUR SICK!!!

MARK

Goddamn you, Slasher, Goddamn you!

ED

By the way, asswipe, my name is Ed! Hehehe...

Mark kicks Ed's back. Ed isn't harmed, Hilary starts to raise up her axe.

HILARY

Now it's your turn to die, ****er!

Ed looks up at Hilary with and evil face.

ED

You kill me...and I'll come and kill you!...you and your friends! Heh...

Hilary chops Ed's head off. Ed's head rolls across the porch, Hilary stares down at it, Ed's head shoots a wink at her, and lies still, dead.

MINDY

Hell yeah, Hil! You nailed him.

KRISSY

Coolio!

HILARY

Heh.

MARK

Yeah, Hilary, you kick monster ass! What should we do with the body now?

Hilary looks around, and sees into the deep dark creek in the woods.

HILARY

Over there, lets take them over there to the creek.

INT. CREEK / FORESTPINE / NIGHT

Soon, we see Hilary carrying Ed's head, Mark, Krissy, and Mindy are carrying up the body. They all walk into the woods. Hilary thens stops at the edge of the creek.

HILARY

Here will be fine.

KRISSY

Got ya

Mark, Krissy, and Mindy toss the body into the creek. Hilary holds up Ed's head, the head is still. Hilary then drops Ed's head into the creek.

MINDY

What a job!

KRISSY

Yep

MARK

Let's go and tell the nehibors Ed is dead!

HILARY

Let's go!

And so they all run into the dark streets of Forestpine. Many moments later, a flash of ghost light shoots out of the creek, Ed's evil spirit is out, Ed dusts off his arms and legs, and stretched his neck, and looks aroud him, surprised that he's still alive.

ED

Wo! Am I in freakin' heaven or somethin'? No, it's Forestpine!

Ed starts to walk up the hillside, but is shot back by some sort of force, it was a force field, blocking him from the entrance to Forestpine. Ed gets up.

ED

What the hell? What's with the stupid blockage?!

Ed slams his knife on it and the field pushes him back. Soon Ed then found a area where his hand slid threw. Then he stepped threw it. The killing spirit of Ed the Forestpine Slasher has returned. Ed looks and studies his hands, they're pale like a body from a moruge, his eyes were darkened.

ED

Wow! I'm a ****in' ghost!

Then Ed pulls out his knife from his pocket, its still alittle stained with blood, and he makes a wide grin.

ED

Hehehe...a killer ghost!

Ed turns to his house. Suddenly Ed turns invisible.

ED

Time to pay some good ol' friends a little visit!...Hehehe...

Ed starts to walk toward his house.

INT. ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Hilary, Mark, Krissy and Mindy are getting their things packed. Hilary then sits on the couch, sighing in depression, remebering her dead friends. Mark could see the tears falling down her face, so he sits beside her and hugs her. Hilary hugs Mark back, crying in his chest

HILARY

There all dead! All this just for a quick damn stop!

MARK

I know I know.

Mindy whispers to Krissy.

MINDY

Psst... let's leave them alone for a bit...

KRISSY

Righto

Krissy and Mindy slowlydrop their things and walk to another room. Mark and Hilary are having their moments with eachother.

INT. OUTSIDE / NIGHT

Ed reappears and is just about close to touching the front door knob, when he looked over at the window of Street Reletive #1's house. Ed throws on his evil grin again.

ED

I'll just go and have some fun! Hehehe...

Ed scampers over to Street Reletive #1's house.

INT. STREET RELETIVE #1'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Street Reletive #1 is making herself some coffee, with a jolt of fright, she hears the front door bang open. Street Reletive #1 walks to the door and closes it quickly. Then she hears something in the kitchen. Ed is just playing around with Street Reletive #1. Street Reletive #1 enters the kitchen, theres nothing in there. Then she walks up the stairs. Ed follows her up the stairs. Street Reletive #1 walks into the bathroom, she clears her eyes.

STREET RELETIVE #1

I've got to stop having haloosanations!

Street Reletive #1 bends down to soak her face in her sink. She lifts up her head, and screams when she sees Ed in the mirror behind her. She spins around, nothing there, and she turns back to the mirror, and theres nothing there. Street Reletive #1 sighs in relief. When she turns around, Ed is right behind her, she screams.

INT. ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Hilary, Mark, Mindy, and Krissy hear the scream.

MINDY

Oh no...

INT. STREET RELETIVE #1'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Ed stabs Street Reletive #1's roof in her mouth, stabbing her brains out. Blood shooting everywhere. Street Reletive #1 spits blood at Ed's face.

STREET RELETIVE #1

Go to Hell!

ED

Already been there, and I must confess I loved what I saw, and I loved what I did!

Ed pulls the knife out, and Street Reletive #1 drops to the floor. Ed takes his knife and licks the blood off.

ED

Mmm! Just the way I like it, hehehe...

Ed leaves Street Reletive #1's house. Moments later, Hilary and Mark come into the house.

HILARY

Miss?

MARK

Hello?

Hilary goes up the stares while Mark looks around in the kitchen. Hilary goes into the bathroom, nothing there, she then pulled back the curtains from the bath tub, sees Street Reletive #1's dead body in it, in a pool of blood. Hilary screams. Hilary then jots back down the stairs. Mark gets surprised at Hilary's appearence.

MARK

What?! What's wrong?

HILARY

She's dead! She's dead! Ed killed her!

MARK

Wo, wo, wo I thought we killed Ed, he's dead! He might of killed her before he died!

HILARY

But--

Hilary gasped as she saw muddy footsteps on the floor. Mark sees them too.

MARK

How the hell?

HILARY

Mark let's get out of here, while we still can...

Hilary and Mark run out of the house.

INT. ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Ed gets into his house, quietly, and locks the door behind him so no help comes. Mindy walks across the hallway, Ed is invisible. Krissy is in the other room.

KRISSY

With Mark and Hilary gone, what should we do?

MINDY

Who knows?

Mindy walks into the laundry room, Ed sneaks in with her, and the lights go off.

MINDY

Damn lights went out!

ED

Hehehe...

MINDY

What was that?! Oh wait I think I found a light switch.

Mindy turns on the lights, Ed reappears and is right infront of her, Mindy tries to scream, but Ed grabs her neck, choking her, and Mindy heard a crack sound from her neck. Ed had crushed her lyrings. Now that Mindy can't speak, Ed gets behind her and stabs her back, multiple times. Mindy bleeds badly, and runs out of the laundry room and into the kitchen. Ed grabs her arm and slashes it off, ripping it. Mindy's stump shoots torents of blood allover the floor. Ed looks around him, he sees a lighter, and vegetable oil, he smiles and takes them. He pours oil into his mouth, lits the lighter, and spits fire at Mindy's face. Mindy's face starts to melt a bit. Mindy is dead. Krissy enters the kitchen.

KRISSY

(Fearfully) ...Mindy?...

Krissy sees Mindy dead, and screams. Krissy tries to get out of the house. The basement door is locked, the back door, the windows, the front door, everywhere she when, the house was locked. Krissy then looked around, she ran across the hall, and a mirror. Ed is seen in the mirror, heading for Krissy.


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Pretty good. That lighter kill was cool! To be honest I thought the part of Ed being resurrected and the teen's dialogue was pretty stiff. Other than that though I enjoyed it.

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Thanks

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Krissy runs upstairs and gets into a bedroom, she locked the door, and when she turned around, there sitting at the edge of the bed, was Betty's body, her throat was slit and her eyes were carved out. Krissy screams. Ed is banging on the door.

ED

LET ME IN!

Krissy runs across the room and open a window, but can't escape because its just a long way down from the window onto the stone floor at the bottom. Krissy looks back, as the banging stops. Krissy walks to the door, she pushes Betty's body onto the floor, then she pressed her ear to the door and listens. Nothing is going on. Krissy then bends down and looks through the crack under the door. Ed is not there. Krissy then unlocks the door slowly, then the door breaks open, sending Krissy flying onto the bed. We see Invisable Ed raising his knife, Ed's knife is all we can see. Ed's knife inches closer to Krissy. Krissy is thrown onto the bed. Ed's knife begins to stab her multiple times. Krissy screams. Krissy is then turned over and is stabbed in the back multiple times. Ed laughes evilishly as he kills Krissy. Krissy looks over at the T.V. and sees Ed killing her and screams, and vomits up blood. Krissy is then still. Krissy is dead. Ed walks out of the room giggling. On his way down, he hears his hands cracking. Ed looks down at them and examines.

ED

What the hell?

Ed cracks his hands more. He notices he has bones.

ED

Bones?

Ed then notices he has skin and hair. Then he smiles and understands.

ED

Oh now I see, the more victims I kill, the more I grow into a human! This is great!! Hahahahahaha!...

Scene 15

Moments later, Hilary and Mark at at Ed's house.

HILARY

I hope Mindy and Krissy are alright Mark...

MARK

I think they're okay.

Mark then tries to open the door, but it's locked.

MARK

They must've locked the door for the killer not to get in...

Mark knocks on the door. Nobody answers.

MARK

Girls! It's us! Mark and Hil!

Mark knocks again. Nobody answers.

HILARY

Hello?

Silence. Mark then backs away.

MARK

Stand back Hilary, I'm gonna kick open the door!

Hilary quickly backs away. Mark kicks open the door. As Mark and Hilary step into the house, they smell the rotten flesh. Mark runs upstairs.

MARK

Krissy? Mindy?

HILARY

Mindy!

Hilary looks around the family room. Hilary hears Mark scream upstairs. Hilary runs into the kitchen and sees Mindy's dead body and screams. Mark runs down the steps, as Hilary comes to meet him, a slash mark gets her on her chest. Ed's knife slashes up Hilary, as Hilary tried to shield herself. Mark looked into the mirror, and sees Ed slashing Hilary.

MARK

Hil! He's in the mirror! There he is!

Ed looks over at the mirror in surprise. Hilary looks over at the mirror and sees Ed, she then kicks Ed, and runs to Mark.

INT.FORESTPINE / NIGHT

Mark and Hilary run outside and run for the car.

HILARY

Do you think it still works?

MARK

Let's see

Mark and Hilary get into the car. Mark tries to start the car, but it won't start.

HILARY

****!

MARK

Damn it!

Mark gets out and opens the hood of the motor.

MARK

He cut the cord!

Hilary looks over in the doorway. Ed's knife comes up and starts to head toward them.

HILARY

Mark! Hurry up and fix it! He's coming!

Mark looks over and sees Ed's knife too, and gets to work. Soon Mark fixes the cord and gets back into the car and starts it up, the headlights turn on, and Ed reappears and is infront of them. Ed jumps on the hood and stabs on the window. Ed slips his arm into Mark's window and starts to choke him. Hilary looks at the buttons next to Mark, and presses the roll up button, the window rolls up and slashes Ed's arm off, and it lands in Mark's lap, Mark gets freaked out and tosses it onto the floor. Mark drives away down the street toward the circle. Ed gets up and looks at his stump, then looks up at them and smiles.

MARK

I don't know...how the **** he did that...but we're getting the hell out of here!

HILARY

But we need to get to the police and let them handle this!

MARK

Alright.

On the floor, Ed's arm jiggles and then starts to move across the floor, and starts to creep to Mark's leg and on the steering wheel. Mark and Hilary see it and scream. Ed's arm turns the wheel in a opposite direction, the car zig zags and crashes into a big tree. Mark and Hilary get out of the car and collapse to the ground trying to revive themselves.

MARK

Goddamn! My leg!

Ed's arm then hops out of the car and creeps over to the street and is still. Ed's shadow covers over Ed's arm. Ed picks up his arm and sticks it back in his socket, good as new. Ed then smiles and dissapears. Street Reletive #2 comes out with a shotgun.

STREET RELETIVE #2

What the hell is going on out here?!

Mark and Hilary get up and limp toward Street Reletive #2. Ed searches through the side of the car, and finds a nail gun and takes it.

MARK

Ed is back, we don't know how, but he's back

STREET RELETIVE #4

What's going on?

STREET RELETIVE #2

Don't give me any of that ****! Now you told us Ed is dead now why are you tellin' me he's back?!

Ed's knife stabs through Street Reletive #2's back, and Street Reletive #2 falls to the ground, dead. Street Reletive #4 screams. Ed takes out the nail gun, and shoots a few nails into Street Reletive #4's neck, as she vomits up blood and falls down dead.

HILARY

NOO!!

Ed runs toward Mark and hits the back of his head knocking Mark out. Ed picks up Mark.

ED

Your my bait!

Ed starts to scamper down the street. Hilary sees Ed running down the street carrying Mark, as she crawls from the crash.

HILARY

YOU SON OF A *****!!! YOU LET HIM GO!!!

Ed continues running down the street, and dissapears into his house. Hilary limps over and falls, her hand hits the shotgun. Hilary looks up at the gun and clasps it. Hilary then stands up and limps toward the street.

Scene 16

INT. ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

Mark is just tossed along the floor. Mark slowly opens his eyes.

MARK

Where am I?...

Mark sees someone walking down the stairs, it's Ed.

ED

Your in a ****hole my friend, hehehe...

MARK

Where's Hilary?...

ED

She's coming...to die! HAHAHA!...

MARK

Your a *******...

ED

Wrong, your the *******...

Ed raises his knife stepping toward Mark.

ED

Let's play a game while Hilary makes her way here! How about...Surgery!

Ed stabs into Mark's left leg.

MARK

AWW! GOD!

ED

Hehehe...the patient must feel alittle more pain before the disection begins!

Ed then stabs Mark's right leg, this time, he stabs through a bone.

MARK

OH! ****!!!

ED

Hehehehe! This is fun!

Hilary, behind Ed, shoots Ed's back. Ed turns around and giggles.

ED

So you finally came!

HILARY

**** you!

Hilary shoots Ed a few times, until Ed shoots his knife at her leg, piercing her leg. Ed looks down at his wounds as they heal up. Hilary slowly pulls out the knife and throws it into Ed's head, Ed pulls it out and the wound heals itself. Ed licks off Hilary's blood on his knife.

ED

Mmm, Cherry! Hehehe...

Ed walks toward Hilary.

ED

You think you can kill me like you did before?

Hilary remembers what Ed said before she killed him.

INT. FLASHBACKS / ED'S HOUSE / NIGHT

ED

You kill me...and I'll come and kill you!...you and your friends! Heh...

Hilary chops off Ed's head.

INT. PRESENT / FORESTPINE / NIGHT

HILARY

Oh my god...you wern't kidding at all!

ED

That's Right! Hehehe...

MARK

Except one thing...

ED

Huh?

Mark is standing up and loads up his gun.

MARK

You didn't kill her!

Mark shoots Ed, sending him flying to the door and outside. Hilary quickly closes and boards up the door. Ed stabs at the window, and then runs off into another direction. Hilary runs to Mark and hugs him.

HILARY

Oh Mark! Thank you!

MARK

Don't mention it...AH GOD!!

HILARY

Your legs...

Hilary looks around her, and sees gray duck tape and takes it.

HILARY

This may hurt a bit Mark

MARK

I understand...Do it!

Hilary wraps the tape around Mark's right leg, hearing the bone crack. Mark wimpers and hits on the floor in pain.

HILARY

Sorry...

MARK

Keep going...

Hilary then taped up Mark's left leg. Hilary helped Mark stand up and limp up the stairs. Hilary runs into the hallway and locks the front door. Mark limps over to the fridge.

MARK

God, I need a drink.

Mark opens the freezer and sees frozen body parts and intestins.

MARK

Jesus!

Mark backs away, Ed is behind the basement door. Ed pops out and scares Mark.

MARK

What the hell are you?!

ED

The soul taker and keeper!

Ed slashes Mark across his chest, sending Mark falling down the stairs, Mark hits the bottom and sits lop sided. Ed closes the door and locks it.

ED

He should've watched his step...Hehehehe...

Hilary gets behind Ed and hits the back of his head with a pipe. Ed falls to the floor. Ed feels pain on his head.

ED

Damn, that hurt!

Hilary starts to pour gasoline all over Ed, Ed tries despretly to wipe it off. Ed touches his head and looks at his hand, it's coated with blood.

ED

No...I'm half alive!...

Hilary lights a match and steps infront of Ed, Ed looks up at Hilary, and sees the lit match. Ed gasps.

ED

You wouldn't dare!

HILARY

But I do.

Hilary drops the match on Ed setting him on fire. Ed bursting into flames and screaming.

ED

NOO!! AHHH!!! NOO! NO!!! NO!!! AHHH!!!

Ed stands up and goes killer crazy, trying to take a slash at Hilary, swinging his knife around like crazy. Hilary gets scared. Hilary then looks over at the back door, she gets an idea. Hilary kicks Ed and runs to the back door, its locked tightly, so she starts to beat on it, it opens. Ed is right behind Hilary. Ed almost slashes Hilary's side, but Hilary backs up and turns and kicks Ed's head sending him out onto the porch. Ed stumbles up, Hilary looks at the edge behind Ed and jump kicks Ed off the edge, Ed's back splits in half as he screams in pain and falls down to the ground completely. Hilary looked down at Ed thrashing his body around. Soon, moments later, Ed was still. He was dead. Hilary then turns back and heads back for the basement door. Hilary unlocks the door and runs down the stairs to hug around Mark.

HILARY

Mark! Come on Mark wake up! Wake up please!

Hilary kisses Mark.

MARK

Urrrrrggggghhhhhh...

HILARY

Mark?

MARK

Hil...

HILARY

Mark! It's over! Ed's dead!

MARK

Dead, dead?

HILARY

Yes!

MARK

That's good...

HILARY

Mark, stay right here, I'm gonna get you some medicine okay? And then we're gonna get out of here.

MARK

Okay...

Hilary runs upstairs, she looks into the cabnets, and suddenly, a cell phone falls out.

HILARY

Yes!

Hilary takes the phone and dials police.

HILARY

Hello? Yes police?

Scene 17

In the next room in the basement, the window is broken. Someone broke into the basement. Blood is coated all over the windowsill. The blood trails onto the floor toward the doorway. Ed is still alive.

HILARY

Yes, please hurry down...thank you...

Hilary runs back down stairs. Mark isn't at the wall.

HILARY

Mark?

Hilary looks around the the basement for Mark. Soon she has something touching her foot, she looks down and sees Don's body on the floor at her feet. Hilary trips alittle, then a knife stabs toward Hilary on the floor. Hilary looks down at the knife and to her horror, it was Ed trying to stab her with his knife. Ed was all burnt and melted around his body and face.

ED

I've got you now Hilary!...and you know what I'm gonna do to you know?...I'm gonna rip your ****in' head off and **** down your neck!

Ed takes a stab at Hilary. Hilary kicks Ed's face into the wall. Ed pulls back, ripping off the side of his face. Ed grabbed Hilary's leg. Ed raised up his knife. Mark crawls out of nowhere and blocks Hilary's leg, Ed stabs into his head. Ed stabs his head multiple times.

MARK

Hil...

HILARY

MARK! NO!!

ED

That's what I call a splitting headache!...Hehehe!...

Hilary sees an axe on the floor and takes it. Ed crawls closer to her. Hilary raises up her axe. Ed looks up at Hilary.

HILARY

Die you son of a *****!

Hilary chops off Ed's head, as blood shoots in her face. Ed's head flys across the floor. Ed's body is still. Hilary throws the axe aside. Hilary puts Mark's head on her lap and strokes his hair, his eyes are wide open, so Hilary closes them. Ed's body's arm clasps onto Hilary's shoulder, then both hands were choking her. Hilary got to the floor. She look around her and saw the shotgun. Hilary reached for the shotgun, and took it. Hilary aimed it at Ed's head. And shoots. Ed's head explodes, pieces of his brains splatter all over the wall. Ed's body is still again. Hilary stands up. Ed's body turns to dust and dissapears. Then the clothes dissapear. Leaving the knife behind. Hilary limps away to the stairs. Hilary has blankets put over her friends bodies, as she heads outside into a white work truck. She fixes the cut cord and hops into the truck and finds the keys and starts it up.

HILARY

So long guys...

The truck drives off into the street, and out of Forestpine. We slowly go back into the house, and down the basement, and upclose to Ed's knife. It's snatched away by invisable Ed. Everything is black and we hear Ed's evil laughter.

END / CREDITS

BRAIN DAMAGE FILMS PRESENTS

A TOBY JOHANSEN FILM

THE FORESTPINE SLASHER

CAST
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TOBY JOHANSEN as Ed

MONICA RIAL as Hilary

JULIET CESARIO as Mom

(UNKNOWN ACTOR FOR: SON)

PETREA BURCHARD as Ed's Mom

(UNKNOWN ACTOR FOR: ED’S DAD)

JACE JOHANSEN as 9-year-old Ed

JORDAN RENALDS as Cop 1

EMILY ARMSTRONG as Cop 2

COLLEEN CLINKENBEARD as Street Reletive #1

KARI WAHLGREN as Krissy

JENNIFER SEKIGUCHI as Betty

GEORGETTE REILLY as Mindy

ZOE FRIES as Amy

JOHN YONG BOSCH as Josh

GREG AYRES as Don

TERRI HAWKS as Street Reletive # 2

LIAM CHRISTOPHER O’BRIEN as Mark

MICHELLE RUFF as Street Reletive # 3

JENNIFER DARLING as Street Reletive #4

Camera Supervistor
JORDAN RENALDS
TOBY JOHANSEN

Casting by.
TOBY JOHANSEN

Edited by.
(UNKNOWN)

Special Effects by.
JORDAN RENALDS
and
TOBY JOHANSEN

Director of Photography
TOBY JOHANSEN

Music by.
TOBY JOHANSEN
and MIDNIGHT SYNDICATE

Written by.
TOBY JOHANSEN

SPECIAL THANKS TO:
--------------------
MONICA RIAL
JULIET CESARIO
(UNKNOWN ACTOR FOR: SON)
PETREA BURCHARD
(UNKNOWN ACTOR FOR: ED’S DAD)
JACE JOHANSEN
JORDAN RENALDS
EMILY ARMSTRONG
COLLEEN CLINKENBEARD
KARI WAHLGREN
JENNIFER SEKIGUCHI
GEORGETTE REILLY
ZOE FRIES
JOHN YONG BOSCH
GREG AYRES
TERRI HAWKS
LIAM CHRISTOPHER O’BRIEN
MICHELLE RUFF
JENNIFER DARLING

Created and Directed by.
TOBY JOHANSEN

[ResidentEvil131]

So what does everyone think of the movie?

I thought it was awsome

[SnoBorderZero]

Cool I liked it. Use the ideas about the possessing I told you.

[ResidentEvil131]

I told u not to shout that out! thats in the sequil

[SnoBorderZero]

*Deadbolts mouth shut*

[ResidentEvil131]

ill give out some new scenes later if you want? for FS 2, 3, and 4

I have a special favorite in 4 and 3! :D

[ResidentEvil131]

http://groups.msn.com/ForestpineSlasher/shoebox.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=12

http://groups.msn.com/ForestpineSlasher/shoebox.msnw?action=ShowPhoto&PhotoID=11

New pics! of 9-years-old Ed! Enjoy them!

In #2, me and Sno's favorite part, is when Ed gets a girl and posses her, and causes some carnage. In #3, my favorite part in the movie is when Ed takes over a girl's body, and when he almost makes out with a guy he takes a knife and stabs his dick off and when he attacks Hilary, Hilary is near a mirror and doesnt see the girl, but Ed attacking her and she's like "Oh Jesus!", and in the almost end in the movie is when Ed sets a huge saramony in the basement to finally kill Hilary, candles everywhere and she's tied to the a wall or something, Hilary's dead bodyed friends are sitting around, and Ed kills her. In #4, is when a woman sees Ed killing someone and Ed turns his head all the way around to see her, Ed sprouts up and has his head down, and walks toward the woman like a krippled puppet and kills her.

[ResidentEvil131]

...pause for an effect...(<<<<< love this qote :D )

[ResidentEvil131]

I wonder if Ed will be a different kind of killer in the BDF industry?

[ResidentEvil131]

NEWS: From Ohayocon 5, anime con in columbus ohio, I was talking with Monica Rial to see if she was intrested, she says she's a big fan of horror and so is Greg, so I gave her the script and now Monica and Greg are viewing the scripts as we speak! And they will be giving away the scripts to the other actors and hoping they'll be availible around the fall this year. So now I'm waiting for call and emails. Jennifer Sekiguchi says she is alittle busy, not knowing about the fall thingy. So I wrote all the actors letters with their scripts.